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[A TOASTy Adventure]

The animation is good and I'm sure you know what you're doing. But in terms of everything else It's either average or below average. You should either make your art better or have a friend do it for you. Also the quality starts to get worse near the end. Take your time and maybe you"ll be able to make something pretty cool.

sanguinePengu1n responds:

Thanks for the constructive critique! I wholeheartedly agree with this. As you probably know, it was a collaborative effort. I did most of the animation, but some things were made by my group partners (notably the other two characters with sketchy outlines and the backgrounds.) Another thing is time. Man, I struggle a lot with that. I had to come to school late to submit the finished project, and it ended up looking like a little rushed at the end. I think it turned out okay either way.

Again, thank you for the review. It will help me in future projects.